pie4ever0's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doodle Devil]

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I can barely even call this a review, as there's so little to improve. A few combinations you missed do, however, come to mind. . .
(Note: The below are NOT in the game. I am SUGGESTING as to what should be in the game.)
Angel + Death = Angel of Death
Prayer + Disease = Annointing of the Sick
Politcian + Chaos = President
Disease + Human = Cripple
Also, please either censor nudity or atleast check the 'Nudity' box when publishing the game.

[Newgrounds Character Quiz]

Did you put any honest-to-god effort into this?

I got Pico, just as nearly EVERYONE below me, even though I put "I have no friends", and Pico's description includes "You are an awesome person who has many friends". Next time, please make an effort.

Sispri responds:

pie4ever0 does not have any Portal submissions.

[The Maze 10Levels - v1.0]

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This really isn't too different from any other maze game I've seen on Newgrounds, but there ARE a few things you could do to improve this.

-Put in a menu screen, with the name of the game at the top, a "play" button below that, a "Newgrounds.com" button below THAT, and at the very bottom include a link to your profile. Also, a few previews of the game on the side wouldn't hurt.

-Instead of the square, maybe you could have flags that say "Start" and "Finish".

-Make it so that your mouse leaves a line behind it. Somehow, that's just plain awesome.

-Instead of sending the player back to Level 1 every time they die, have them be sent back to the level they were on. If you still want the game to be hard, then add a certain number of "lives". If a character dies but has a life left, sent them to the beginning of the level they were on. If not, send them to the beginning, or even add a "game over" screen that gives them two options: "Continue"(sends you back to Level1), or "Main Menu"(Sends you to the menu screen, IF you make it)

I'm not saying any of this will give you a frontpage, but it would probably be great for practicing your flash skills!

Lojmeister responds:

sounds good, thx for the feedback m8! :) im allways looking for ways to improve my skills in flash.

[This is the Only Level II]

Ultimate Glitch, or Simply a New Stage?

Great game, but I found an extremely strange glitch. On the "Amazeing" level, I was trying to figure my way through and suddenly the whole screen started to freak out! The walls and floors all changed color every second, and the stage said "31" "undefined". Also, there was a light coming from the entrance pipe. I don't know if that was a special new level or what, but it lagged ALOT.

[Newgrounds medals: EXT]

Fine tutorial, but you forgot ONE thing.

The entire tutorial was fine, but the "Master of Secrets" medal was by far overrated due to the fact you didn't disable the TAB key, so you'd be able to find it without much difficulty.

[Depict1]

An excellent game.

Graphics were nice (But then again, I'm one who can be impressed by most sprites), the storyline was simple yet complex, and where the character's eyes are is a mystery to me. I liked the whole 'moral' of the boss battle, which many games have. It's something like this: "You Can Overcome Any Obstacle By Throwing Stuff At Your Shadow". However, one thing was missing from this game: A spike counter, to tell you how many spikes you had left. Also, for those of you stuck, I have a small tip for you: "Patience in the eye of the obstacle is a true virtue indeed." How do ya like that? Sounds smart, huh? I just made that up, on the spot! :D

[Newgrounds HQ Showdown]

The medals were too easy and predictable.

You should've added a couple more, like "Get defeated by Austin Breed", or "Kill Austin Breed on the first level.". You also could have had only five different animal teams appear each time you play, and you face random ones each time, so that you'd have to play the game a couple times for all medals.

[PixEvo - The Fountain]

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The game was difficult up to the point where you became a complete beast, because you could easily knock down all the doors previously in your way, and fly without ever falling. However, even WITH those abilities, it's still impossible to complete the game, as you lose your arms and can't pull the last lever. Project or not, every game should be possible to beat.

[SHIFT 3]

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I just finished this game and I'm about to go on to play Shift 4, But If there's a secret Mel Gibson character in Shift 4, I'm gonna tell my computer it has a 'Lameness' Virus and throw it out the window.

[Journalizm]

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I wouldn't be surprised if a sequel to this game got an almost-instant frontpage. If you do make a sequel, which I really hope you do, then it could possibly be even better with the following ideas:
1) The ability to customize and name your original workers
2) The Girl's work on your main three workers.
3) The ability to upgrade your work hours or workers for them to make more ideas.
4) More types of articles, such as food, sports, or celebrity gossip.
5) Instead of having gangsters kill your workers, you should have an ATM or chest in the room and the gangsters take money from there until you kill them.
6) Perhaps make it so when a girl kisses one of your workers and they are "Lovestruck", they will still ask for money, but the amount will be doubled, as if they are taking extra money for gifts.
If you think that I am suggesting that I did not like this game, then you are mistaken; As a matter of fact, this is easily the best game I have ever played on Newgrounds, and I would recommend it to my friends if they played Newgrounds.